Of Course It Was Him/Her

A demonstration in two parts, and what it demonstrates

What follows is a demonstration. It makes a case twice, from real evidence (nothing below is invented), and asks you to notice what you feel at the end of each part.

Part One

The Case for Edward de Vere, 17th Earl of Oxford

Start with what the record shows.

In 1578, the poet and scholar Gabriel Harvey composed a sequence of Latin verses addressed to the leading figures of Elizabeth’s court. In the verses addressed to Edward de Vere, then twenty-eight years old, recently returned from fourteen months in Italy, Harvey records that he has seen many of de Vere’s Latin verses and that “more English are extant,” praises him as more courtly than Castiglione, and counts his literary gifts among those acknowledged at court. Harvey was addressing a writer he took seriously, in a formal public document.

Eleven years later, in 1589, George Puttenham published The Arte of English Poesie, the most substantial critical work of the Elizabethan period. In it he describes “very many notable Gentlemen in the Court that haue written commendably, and suppressed it agayne, or els suffred it to be publisht without their owne names to it,” names “that noble Gentleman Edward Earle of Oxford” first among the courtly writers of the reign, and ranks him with Richard Edwards among those who “deserve the highest price” for comedy and interlude. Aristocratic anonymity was an established Elizabethan practice, and Puttenham places de Vere in the circle that followed it, nine years before the Shakespeare name appeared on any printed work.

In 1598, Francis Meres published Palladis Tamia, a literary survey listing the leading English writers of the age. He names de Vere first among the best for comedy, alongside other court poets. In the same text, he lists twelve Shakespeare plays. Both lists appear within pages of each other. Meres treats de Vere and Shakespeare as distinct; he also treats both as among the most important dramatic writers of the period.

Now consider the Italian plays. Richard Paul Roe, a California attorney, spent years travelling the places Shakespeare set in Italy (Verona, Venice, Milan, Padua) and, in The Shakespeare Guide to Italy (2011), set out what he found the plays got right, down to local details: private courtyards, canal routes, the position of particular buildings, the way from one piazza to another. Roe argues that these details could not have come from the books or maps of the period and are the details of someone who had been there, and Edward de Vere had been there. His documented Italian journey of 1575–76 took him to Milan, Venice and Siena, and by one later account as far south as Palermo. He brought Italian fashions home with him: John Stow records that the scented gloves he introduced became the fashion at court.

Translators of books Shakespeare used were close to de Vere. Arthur Golding, whose English Metamorphoses (1567) Shakespeare drew on throughout the plays and poems, was de Vere’s uncle, and dedicated other translations to him. Thomas Bedingfield dedicated his translation of Cardano’s Comfort to Oxford in 1573, with a letter and a poem by Oxford himself printed in the front; Hardin Craig and other critics have called it “Hamlet’s book.” Thomas Underdowne dedicated his translation of Heliodorus’s Aethiopica to Oxford in 1569, a book whose traces run through several plays, Cymbeline most prominently.

One such link would be unremarkable, and here there are three.

A Geneva Bible owned by de Vere, identifiable from his armorial bookplate, survives. Roger Stritmatter’s doctoral dissertation at the University of Massachusetts catalogued 1,043 marked passages in that Bible and found 246 of them in Shakespeare’s works, as a theme, an allusion or a quotation, often in the Geneva translation’s own phrasing. The Bible and its marked passages survive.

William Cecil, Lord Burghley, was de Vere’s guardian from the age of twelve and later his father-in-law. Cecil composed a set of private precepts, Certain Precepts, or Directions for the Well Ordering and Carriage of a Man’s Life, addressed to his son Robert, surviving as a manuscript. They warn against standing surety for a friend (“he which payeth another man’s debts seeks his own decay”), against spending “above three of the four parts of thy revenue,” and against “parasites and sycophants” who fawn in prosperity. The substance and the register correspond to Polonius’s advice to Laertes in Hamlet (“Neither a borrower nor a lender be, / For loan oft loses both itself and friend”; “Costly thy habit as thy purse can buy”) with a specificity that has struck scholars across the authorship spectrum. Cecil’s manuscript survives, Polonius’s words are in the play, and de Vere grew up in Cecil’s house.

Between 1564 and 1599, twenty-eight works were dedicated to de Vere, by writers including Arthur Golding, John Lyly, Robert Greene and Anthony Munday, and Edmund Spenser addressed a dedicatory sonnet to him in The Faerie Queene (1590). John Lyly was de Vere’s personal secretary for years; his plays were performed by de Vere’s own acting company, Oxford’s Men. Anthony Munday worked directly in de Vere’s literary household. The writers who most closely surrounded the Shakespeare phenomenon, the University Wits, the court poets, the pamphlet writers of the 1590s, orbited de Vere. He stood at the centre of the literary world that produced Shakespeare.

And then he died, in June 1604. Puttenham (1589) and Meres (1598) both rank him among the finest writers of comedy of the age, yet not one play survives under his name.

If you have been persuaded, note the feeling. It will be relevant shortly.

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Part Two

The Case for Mary Sidney Herbert

Start, again, with what the record shows.

Mary Sidney Herbert was the Countess of Pembroke, sister of Philip Sidney, and received more dedications than any other woman of non-royal rank. Wilton House, her seat in Wiltshire, was the centre of a literary circle that John Aubrey said was “like a college”; Spenser, Daniel, Drayton, Jonson and Sir John Davies are counted among it. This is documented, and she was a writer as well as a patron.

She completed and substantially revised Philip Sidney’s translation of the Psalms after his death in 1586, a work scholars have described as among the finest poetry of the age. Her translation of Petrarch’s Triumph of Death directly from the Italian is extant. She translated Garnier’s Marc Antoine from the French as Antonius (1592), a closet drama on the story Shakespeare later dramatised in Antony and Cleopatra. Her humanist education included Italian. Her literary range, lyric, dramatic, devotional, classical, matches the Shakespeare canon’s range more closely than any other female candidate.

The First Folio. The collected works of Shakespeare, published in 1623, are dedicated to William Herbert, 3rd Earl of Pembroke, and Philip Herbert, Earl of Montgomery, her sons. William Herbert was at the time Lord Chamberlain, with direct authority over the King’s Men, the company that performed the Shakespeare plays. He was also, from 1623 onward, the dedicatee of the Shakespeare canon. The two men who controlled the publication of those works were Mary Sidney Herbert’s children. She died in 1621, two years before the Folio appeared.

The Avon. Ben Jonson’s dedicatory poem in the Folio addresses the author as the “Sweet Swan of Avon.” The Stratford Avon is the standard gloss, and Leonard Digges’s poem in the same volume mentions “thy Stratford moniment”; but Jonson’s line names only the river, Wilton House stands on the Wiltshire Avon, and Jonson belonged to the Wilton circle.

The literary network. Samuel Daniel, whose Delia sonnets appeared in 1592, was Mary Sidney’s protégé, joined her household at Wilton, and may have tutored her son William. Spenser dedicated Colin Clout’s Come Home Again to her. Jonson’s commendatory verses for the Folio were written by a member of her circle. The Shakespeare works emerge from precisely this world, the Pembroke literary circle, the Sidney inheritance, the Wilton salon, and she was at its centre.

And the silence. Mary Sidney Herbert did not write plays. No play survives under her name. Her documented literary output, the Psalms, the Petrarch translation, the Garnier, the correspondence, accounts for a substantial career, but not a theatrical one. The theatrical career that would explain the Shakespeare canon is, for her, unrecorded.

It is either absent or suppressed. A woman of her rank, writing for the public stage under her own name, would have been without precedent in Elizabethan England. If the plays were written by someone who could not attach her name to them, for reasons that had nothing to do with conspiracy and everything to do with the social position of aristocratic women in the 1590s, the absence of her name on a playbill is exactly what we would expect. Nothing in the primary source record contradicts it.

If you have been persuaded, note the feeling.

It is the same feeling.

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Part Three

What Just Happened

You have just felt the same thing twice, in opposite directions.

The first time, the evidence pointed at Oxford. Each fact followed the next, the Italian journey, the source text dedications, the Geneva Bible, the Hamlet/Cecil connection, the literary circle, and by the end, the conclusion felt obvious. Of course it was him.

The second time, the evidence pointed at Mary Sidney Herbert. Each fact followed the next, the Folio dedication, the Wilton literary circle, the Avon question, the translations and the literary range, and by the end, the conclusion felt obvious. Of course it was her.

Nothing in either section was invented. Every fact cited is documentable. The Italian topography argument is Roe’s; the Geneva Bible is Stritmatter’s; the Cecil/Certain Precepts parallel is established enough that Stratfordian scholars engage with it directly. The Wilton circle and the Folio dedication to her sons are documented; the Wiltshire Avon reading is Robin Williams’s. Both cases rest on genuine primary source evidence.

And yet both cases produce the same feeling of inevitability, and it comes from the method.

It works for any candidate

There is nothing special about Oxford and Mary Sidney Herbert that makes them uniquely susceptible to this. Part Two could have been written for John Florio, the Southampton household, the Montaigne verbal parallels, the botanical dictionaries. It could have been written for Christopher Marlowe, the Deptford inquest, the Privy Council connection, the documented Ovidian voice. It could have been written for Henry Neville, for Thomas North, for Francis Bacon. The method does not require that particular pairing. It requires only a sufficiently documented candidate and a sufficiently motivated assembler of facts. Every candidate on this site meets the first condition. Every advocacy community meets the second.

A more elaborate version of the method builds a narrative timeline rather than a list of correspondences, reading literary texts as autobiography and arranging the interpreted connections into a sequence of events. The timeline will be internally consistent; each event follows from the last. But a narrative built from interpretations of literary texts has the same structure as the correspondence argument, only extended over more steps. The method that generates a complete narrative for one candidate will generate an equally complete narrative for another. The completeness comes from the method.

Two objections

A careful reader will have noticed that Part One is richer than Part Two, that the Oxford section accumulates more specific documented connections than the Mary Sidney Herbert section. This is true. Oxford’s documented life touches the Shakespeare world in more places and in more specific detail, and the convergence analysis on this site reflects that difference in scoring.

The demonstration is not claiming the two cases are equal in evidential weight. It is claiming something narrower and more troubling: that even a thinner case, assembled with the same method and the same momentum, produces the same subjective experience of inevitability. If anything, that makes the demonstration stronger: a technique that generates conviction regardless of the strength of the evidence is no aid to reasoning.

A reader might add: but the Oxford section did feel more convincing than the Mary Sidney Herbert section, so isn’t the method tracking evidential strength after all? Perhaps. But both sections produced the feeling of inevitability, not merely of plausibility, and that feeling arrived in both cases before any critical weighing had taken place. What matters is that the threshold was crossed in both directions by the same mechanism. A method calibrated to criteria would produce confidence and uncertainty in proportion; it would not reliably deliver of course it was him or of course it was her regardless of the underlying case.

A second objection is that this critique picks an easy opponent, that serious advocates of any candidate do not argue by biographical correspondence alone, but by careful engagement with primary sources, document dating, and textual analysis. This is true, and the critique is not aimed at that scholarship. The convergence analysis on this site is an attempt to engage with it seriously. The narrative form demonstrated in Parts One and Two is something different: it is the form in which careful scholarly findings travel into the wider world, shedding their caveats as they go. It is considerably more persuasive than the findings themselves warrant, and it is the form most readers encounter first. That form is what is being examined here.

The denominator problem

This structural problem is the denominator problem. When a correspondent argues that de Vere’s documented Italian journey aligns with the Italian plays, the argument measures a numerator: the number of Italian details in de Vere’s life that match details in the works. What it rarely states is the denominator: how many similar Italian details a comparably educated, court-connected Elizabethan of de Vere’s generation would share with those same works. If many educated Elizabethans of the 1570s and 1580s knew Venice and Verona at comparable depth (and several did) the Italian evidence discriminates far less than its accumulation suggests. The Geneva Bible argument has the same structure: the question is not whether de Vere’s marked passages overlap with Shakespeare’s biblical references, but whether a similarly devout, similarly educated reader of the same Bible in the same period would produce a comparable overlap. These questions are almost never asked, because the denominator is almost never known.

The feeling of inevitability that biographical correspondence generates grows with the length of the list, whatever the discriminating power of the evidence.

Five hundred grains of sand

Think of it this way. A forensic scientist tells you she has tested five hundred grains of sand, each one consistent with Ipanema beach. She presents this as evidence that Neville was Shakespeare. You might be sceptical at first, but five hundred grains? The volume is impressive. Does the case get five hundred times stronger than one grain?

It doesn't. Every grain tells you the same thing the first one did: this sand is consistent with Ipanema. What it doesn't tell you is whether it's consistent only with Ipanema. Copacabana, Leblon, Barra da Tijuca; they all have essentially the same mineral profile. The same grains, sent blindly to a geologist, would match them too. Five hundred grains from Ipanema are not stronger evidence than one; they are the same undiscriminating observation, made five hundred times. Without samples from beaches where the suspect demonstrably was not, no beach has been identified.

But there is a further problem. When you ask how the grains were collected, you learn that the scientist began with Ipanema: she assumed the candidate was there, went there, and filled a jar. The sand matches Ipanema because it came from Ipanema. The collection method assumed the conclusion it was meant to establish. Which means that when someone presents five hundred grains of Ipanema sand as proof their candidate was at Ipanema beach, the fair response is: I already knew they came from Ipanema.

The correspondence catalogue works exactly this way. The advocate begins with a candidate, searches for matches between that candidate's life and the works, finds them, because the canon is rich enough that a diligent search against any educated Elizabethan will produce them, and presents the list as evidence. The list came from the candidate's beach. This is why the number of correspondences in a candidate's favour is not, by itself, evidence of anything. The correspondences may all be genuine. The problem is that the same exercise, run on a different candidate with the same diligence, returns a different beach that looks exactly the same.

The method is biographical correspondence applied to circumstantial evidence: you identify a candidate with a documented life, find the points where that life touches the Shakespeare works or their world, arrange those points in order, and allow the accumulation to do its work. Applied with sufficient rigour and sufficient documentary material, the method is extraordinarily persuasive. It is persuasive because the evidence is real, the connections are real, and the human mind is built to find patterns in real things. The pattern it finds is real but incomplete.

This critique applies equally to the conventional attribution. The case for Shakspere rests on the First Folio (1623, seven years posthumous), the Stratford monument (c.1620s, also posthumous), and Ben Jonson’s “Sweet Swan of Avon” (1623, also posthumous), assembled into a circumstantial narrative in which the man from Stratford is the only candidate proximate to the right name and the right dates. The correspondence method, applied to that narrative, produces the same feeling of inevitability it produces for Oxford and for Mary Sidney Herbert. The critique here is of the method as such, whichever candidate it serves.

The question the method cannot answer

What the method cannot do, what no accumulation of correspondences can do, however long and however carefully assembled, is answer the question it appears to answer. That apparent question is whether a candidate’s life touched the Shakespeare world, and many lives did.

The question that matters is whether this candidate wrote the plays, and it requires a different kind of evidence. It requires a document produced at the time of composition, by someone with direct knowledge, connecting a specific person to a specific work, or circumstantial evidence that meets the five conditions on What Would Settle It, which correspondences of this kind do not. Correspondences, however numerous, however precise, are evidence of proximity and plausibility, and of nothing more.

A navigator’s chart makes the distinction concrete. Twenty bearings on the same headland, however precisely taken, give a single line of position; you know you are somewhere on that line, but you have no fix. A fix requires a bearing on a different landmark, or a depth sounding, or a star sight: evidence from a different source, gathered by a different method. Five hundred grains of Ipanema sand are five hundred bearings on the same headland. What the authorship question needs is a second landmark.

The convergence table on this site reaches this conclusion by a different route, by scoring methodologically diverse evidence lines across eleven candidates and asking where they point. The table places both candidates of this demonstration, Oxford and Mary Sidney Herbert, among its higher totals. It also shows that on the line nearest to a record of the writing, contemporary testimony (a primary source document connecting a candidate to the Shakespeare name or works), no candidate scores a ✓, and only Neville scores even a partial mark. The method used in Parts One and Two of this essay cannot fill that cell.

The feeling of of course it was him (or her) is produced by real evidence, assembled honestly, and it is produced with equal reliability for more than one person, so it comes from the method. The investigation is at the point where the easy moves have been made; what remains is to find a different kind of evidence.

What that evidence would look like, and why it has not yet been found, is the subject of the What Would Settle It page.

The cases presented in Parts One and Two of this essay represent the strongest versions of each candidate’s circumstantial argument, not this site’s overall assessment. The convergence analysis on this site scores both candidates across the independent evidence lines; that scoring, not the narrative above, is the framework’s considered judgment. Both candidates score well, and neither is proved.